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Post by Revolution on Oct 23, 2005 16:17:45 GMT 8
This lyric is singable(is there such a word?)
Mimpi (One Dream)
There's a plan, painting notes of love again
Here's my song, rhyming our love along
Hear the song in your heart
Dreamer's theme, the wish, the dream
Can be true
Patience my love faith renewed
I love you
As deep as it's high, as far as it's wide
This my humble aspiration
Caught by your love's determination
Now and forever
Tasting eternal bliss
Cheerful not sad, I wish you one theme
In faith accomplished with our one love, one dream
Lyrics by : izam_idol from bluehyppo
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Ren_2001
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Post by Ren_2001 on Oct 23, 2005 16:25:07 GMT 8
i am singing .. TESTING the lyric..
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Ren_2001
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Post by Ren_2001 on Oct 23, 2005 16:27:03 GMT 8
but when I sing until this part:-
as deep as it's high,
As far as it's wide...
I feel like *i got diction problem* la.. very hard to sing this part...
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Post by ~Jessy~ on Oct 23, 2005 16:28:03 GMT 8
The lyrics is nice!
It's very hard to re-write the lyrics in another language while retaining the original meaning.
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Post by ~Jessy~ on Oct 23, 2005 16:29:24 GMT 8
but when I sing until this part:- as deep as it's high, As far as it's wide... I feel like *i got diction problem* la.. very hard to sing this part... Yeah, I notice that too.  |
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Post by Revolution on Oct 23, 2005 16:50:11 GMT 8
yalo.... hahaha...all also got same problem...
...out of 10 tries i only get 1 time no diction problem
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Post by agentpink on Oct 23, 2005 17:03:48 GMT 8
haha..diction problem..u all better go learn up ur diction..i refuse to try..sked i oso diction problem..hehe..no ler..lazy..next time la..keep on trying k??hehe..
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Post by agentpink on Oct 23, 2005 17:05:40 GMT 8
eh..tried d..memang ada diction problem..the mouth so sh sh sh..hehe..cant get da thing right..gonna cuba cuba cuba
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Post by ~Jessy~ on Oct 23, 2005 17:08:16 GMT 8
Hehe... I'm trying to write a singable lyrics from the Mandarin lyrics.
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Post by agentpink on Oct 23, 2005 17:09:47 GMT 8
wow..singable??hehe..ok ok..den i practice again..but i tot there's translation d for da fei one..so u go check tht out ok??
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Post by ~Jessy~ on Oct 23, 2005 17:12:22 GMT 8
wow..singable??hehe..ok ok..den i practice again..but i tot there's translation d for da fei one..so u go check tht out ok?? Yes, I translated it. I'm trying to modify it so we can sing along.  |
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Post by Revolution on Oct 23, 2005 17:18:38 GMT 8
i hope the song rhymes though  |
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Post by ~Jessy~ on Oct 23, 2005 17:29:54 GMT 8
Done! I'm not expert, just have a try. Fly My DreamI realized It will never be the same And I know There's glory behind tears I shed Crying alone I don't care Hurt and pain Make me stronger Tomorrow I'll be fine And my dream... Hmm... (Will) never ends Spread my wings and fly Flying up high No matter how tired I will try Flowers may wither Dream never dies Spread my wings and fly Flying up to the sky On my way maybe I'll trip and fall Only makes me stronger to move on To fly Giving me hope Giving me the strength To fly |
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Post by Revolution on Oct 23, 2005 17:32:49 GMT 8
There¡¯s glory behind tears I shed <-- I cant sing this part
and the And I Know part... i think 'I Realized' is better though
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Post by ~Jessy~ on Oct 23, 2005 17:33:26 GMT 8
Hmm... "cry-ing" must be pronounced together. The forth line.... "There's glory behind tears I shed" - "megikut rentak gitar" "There's" is before the bar. So "megikut rentak" goes with "glory behind tears". |
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