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Post by ~Jessy~ on Oct 23, 2005 17:34:22 GMT 8
There¡¯s glory behind tears I shed <-- I cant sing this part and the And I Know part... i think 'I Realized' is better though Yeah, maybe I'll change the first line to "i realized". Thanks for the idea!
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Post by teng on Oct 26, 2005 1:27:09 GMT 8
now its a lil too late for me try to sing . haha . later wake the whole hse out . lolx . will try 2moro . XD
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Post by yuRi on Oct 26, 2005 13:00:33 GMT 8
i have diction problem on the chorus part too.. very nice translated =)
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Post by unixity on Oct 26, 2005 15:57:51 GMT 8
Love both of the versions though. Great job.
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Post by sevelynn on Oct 26, 2005 17:14:23 GMT 8
Quiite nice lor... haha, both can become composers dy!!!
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Post by sevelynn on Oct 28, 2005 0:23:46 GMT 8
Revo, the 'izam_idol' is it mr izham???
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Post by Revolution on Oct 28, 2005 21:04:25 GMT 8
Revo, the 'izam_idol' is it mr izham??? nop he's not...but i guess he's one of the contestants
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Post by dandess8906 on Nov 29, 2005 10:14:21 GMT 8
[glow=red,2,300]Hehehehe.......I'm trying out but i don't think so is nice but hope that all of you like it. It's my own version that's why.And some are different from Daniel's one so you can try it in Daniel's version also can. Hahhaa....
My Dream-MIMPi
I would want writing my own melody, My song following the rythmn of guitar, Listen to the music, my dreams will come true Your name will be in my mind, in my mind
(Chorus) Deeper higher, wider than the road, This is how my dreams go, If you really want to know, Up until now, Until the end, Fun and compassion laughing everytime, We all only have one Dream....... Listen to the music, my dreams will come true Your name will be in my mind, in my mind
Deeper higher, wider than the road, This is how my dreams go, If you really want to know, Up until now, Until the end, Fun and compassion laughing everytime, We all only have one Dream.......dream.............
Fun and compassion laughing everytime, We all only have one Dream...............dream............... My dreams will come true, My......dreams......................
my dreams is to be a singer too and i wanted to join in Malaysian Idol but I'm need to finish my SPM next year first. I'm not 20 actually but i'm 16. So I'll join Malaysian Idol4 if I'm ready. Hahhaha....I don't think so. Okay anyway hope you all like this song. Pls give me some comment because maybe there is some grammar mistakes that I didn't realise.
__________________________________________ ~Daniel you are always my idol~[/glow]
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Post by dandess8906 on Nov 29, 2005 10:22:00 GMT 8
This lyric is singable(is there such a word?) Mimpi (One Dream) There's a plan, painting notes of love again Here's my song, rhyming our love along Hear the song in your heart Dreamer's theme, the wish, the dream Can be true Patience my love faith renewed I love you As deep as it's high, as far as it's wide This my humble aspiration Caught by your love's determination Now and forever Tasting eternal bliss Cheerful not sad, I wish you one theme In faith accomplished with our one love, one dream Lyrics by : izam_idol from bluehyppo It's nice how i wish i could write it that way. You guys are really great in writing but i can't sing that part As deep as it's high, as far as it's wide. I really admire all the words . While mine which I post just now is like rubbish. Hahaha....anyway keep up the good work. Continue to write more songs. __________________________________________ ~Daniel you are always my idol~
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Post by dandess8906 on Nov 29, 2005 10:25:50 GMT 8
Done! I'm not expert, just have a try. Fly My DreamI realized It will never be the same And I know There's glory behind tears I shed Crying alone I don't care Hurt and pain Make me stronger Tomorrow I'll be fine And my dream... Hmm... (Will) never ends Spread my wings and fly Flying up high No matter how tired I will try Flowers may wither Dream never dies Spread my wings and fly Flying up to the sky On my way maybe I'll trip and fall Only makes me stronger to move on To fly Giving me hope Giving me the strength To fly Nice Jessy . great job but i just can't get the tears i shed. Anyway keep up the great job.
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