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Post by ·°"°·¤»YiPhing«¤·°" on Dec 5, 2005 18:18:49 GMT 8
OMG!Wonderful job! Rate:8 1/2 out of 10
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Post by liliansoh on Dec 5, 2005 19:38:28 GMT 8
Soursand Hope one day you can present this POEM to Daniel on stage juz like Maxine dit and if you did, once again we all r goin to shed TEARS.
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Post by caryssa on Dec 5, 2005 22:19:44 GMT 8
OMG pinkies... Thanks for the support.. I'm so touched ;D But I shy shy la... I'll decide on what I should do with the poem after my finals maybe make a card again with the poem inside? i could help with the card.... or maybe pinkies can write more poems...then we make a book of poems especially for Daniel ;D ;D... is this possible? ;D good idea... but.. i m not good in poems.... hehe.. if pinkies submit/post enuf poems here.. we shud make a book of poems...then pinkies will all become "poetic pinkies" sounds nice huh?
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Post by junzuenn on Dec 5, 2005 22:55:27 GMT 8
wayyyyy!!! way to go girl!! it's a good poems.. but if u make the end of every line sounds the same lagi great.. okok.. i rate this 7/10.. kakaaka
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Post by Maxine on Dec 6, 2005 0:59:05 GMT 8
wayyyyy!!! way to go girl!! it's a good poems.. but if u make the end of every line sounds the same lagi great.. okok.. i rate this 7/10.. kakaaka not enough lar... at least 8/10... ;D ;D great job soursand
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Post by puppies on Dec 6, 2005 13:01:02 GMT 8
Soursand!!!!
What can i say, as far as i'm concerned
(1) 10/10 -Perfect TEN ;D ;D ;D (2) Editing - Absolutely unnecessary unless you got more to put in.......SURE DO ALRIGHT ;D ;D ;D (3) Very inspirational for V Squad; post it there-lah ;D ;D ;D
Gee...... if only i can compose like that, sure write one 'love poetry' wanna to tell Daniel from 'secret admirer-lah', make Daniel red face ;D ;D ;D
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Post by soursand on Dec 6, 2005 15:46:10 GMT 8
OMG pinkies... Thanks for the support.. I'm so touched ;D But I shy shy la... I'll decide on what I should do with the poem after my finals maybe make a card again with the poem inside? i could help with the card.... or maybe pinkies can write more poems...then we make a book of poems especially for Daniel ;D ;D... is this possible? ;D Maxine, if you are free, can u make the card??? Then include this poem inside... Can? ;D
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Post by soursand on Dec 6, 2005 15:48:09 GMT 8
Gosh.... THANK YOU VERY MUCH for the ratings ;D
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Post by soursand on Dec 6, 2005 15:55:58 GMT 8
(3) Very inspirational for V Squad; post it there-lah ;D ;D ;D Post in V-squad thread??? Later I kena scolding for spamming the forum ;D
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Post by soursand on Dec 6, 2005 15:59:57 GMT 8
Soursand Hope one day you can present this POEM to Daniel on stage juz like Maxine dit and if you did, once again we all r goin to shed TEARS. In tears Imagine me reading it... I'll break down and cry lo... ;D Then I can't continue reading....
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Post by Maxine on Dec 6, 2005 16:12:36 GMT 8
Soursand!!!! What can i say, as far as i'm concerned (1) 10/10 -Perfect TEN ;D ;D ;D (2) Editing - Absolutely unnecessary unless you got more to put in.......SURE DO ALRIGHT ;D ;D ;D (3) Very inspirational for V Squad; post it there-lah ;D ;D ;D Gee...... if only i can compose like that, sure write one 'love poetry' wanna to tell Daniel from 'secret admirer-lah', make Daniel red face ;D ;D ;D wow.. secret admirer o.. haha... Daniel red face sure very cute !!!
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Post by Maxine on Dec 6, 2005 16:13:41 GMT 8
maybe make a card again with the poem inside? i could help with the card.... or maybe pinkies can write more poems...then we make a book of poems especially for Daniel ;D ;D... is this possible? ;D Maxine, if you are free, can u make the card??? Then include this poem inside... Can? ;D ok.. i will.. new project for me... now i have to start thinking idea how to make this card...*scrath my head* ;D ideas any1?
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Post by joyee on Dec 6, 2005 16:36:30 GMT 8
wah the poem is so nice la...i oso giv 10/10...
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Post by jwong on Dec 6, 2005 17:29:26 GMT 8
First of all, soursand, thank u so much for this poem... its super duper good.... keep it up. ;D ;D ;D As for the rap version - good idea too. Kim, why not u go do one... I am lousy with poems and the like, but I changed some wordings - see if u will like!!!! I've underlined the part I changed... <ok, I not qualified to change anything, but just for the fun of it - I tembak saja lah!!> PINKIES’ LOVE FOR DANIEL
Daniel's MIMPI became reality Gaining more and more popularity Your singing draws the fans your way Being who you are is the way.
No doubt your schedules are very tight Only HEAVEN KNOWS how hard you fight Just in two months time Your album is set to FLY.
After weeks of planning and saving Fans are ready for shopping Even parents are not stopping their children from supporting.
Mature fans are NOT left out Joining the young fans shouting out loud Family, friends and fans are proud We’re THE LUCKY ONEs, there is no doubt.
Some are old, some are new But we are united because of you IRRESISTIBLE love we give to you Every Pinky LOVES TO SEE YOU.
DFC voting squad is formed with duty roster for every chart and form Punching away bringing FEI to the fore top spots at 988 and Ai.FM have been won.
MIMPI is top in Red and Xfresh But YOU JI in MY.FM is still fresh I DON’T KNOW when it will dash But Pinkies will try their very best.
Finding ORGANIC LOVE may not be easy But because of you, having our SECOND CHILDHOOD is easy Daniel Lee Chee Hun, you’re our CHOICE You’re sure to succeed because of your voice.
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Post by cass on Dec 6, 2005 17:33:20 GMT 8
wahh! aunty jwong also so poetic! so malu.. i'm not good at anything keep up the great work!
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