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Post by soursand on Dec 12, 2005 23:14:06 GMT 8
Since we had Chinese and English poems, now it's time for a Malay pantun KELAHIRAN SEORANG BINTANG BARU - DANIELAnak terbang tinggalkan ibu di desa, Kehilangan yang tersayang terasa di dada, Tak kira kaum, tak kira bangsa, Semua bersatu menyokong anda.
Ikan jerung daging biawak, Ada yang makan tak jemu-jemu, Dari Semenanjung hingga Sabah Sarawak, Semua menanti untuk melihatmu.
Perasaan zaman kanak-kanak takkan sama, Hati disentuh fikiran dibelai, Ibu bapamu menjadi peminat pertama, Pengorbanan mereka tidak ternilai.
Tidakku tahu ke manamu pergi, Inginku melihatmu buat kali terakhir, Senyuman manismu nampakkan gigi, Nyanyianmu bagaikan ilmu sihir.
Puteri tampil menaiki gajah, Pilihan yang bertuah ada dalam peti, Kegembiraanmu terpancak di wajah, Walaupun keletihan terasa di hati.
Cinta suci menjadi sandaran, Keikhlasan tak dapat diukur keluasan, Tom yam tembikai menjadi kegemaran, Roti kaya memberi kepuasan.
Korek tanah gunakan sekop, Lagu digubah lirik dikarang, Satu album dibeli tak cukup, Beli lebih untuk dihadiah orang.
Mimpi semalam dalam fikiran, Kenangan manis tak mahu kucampak, Pinkies bersatu menyahut cabaran, Bersama membanteras cetak rompak.
Perasaan mendalam semakin menjadi-jadi, Hanya Tuhan ketahui hala tujumu, Semangat berkobar-kobar skuad pengundi, Sediakan senjata peluru perjuangkan lagumu.
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Post by ~catherine~ on Dec 12, 2005 23:30:06 GMT 8
wah...soursand..did u write that?
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Post by soursand on Dec 12, 2005 23:34:26 GMT 8
wah...soursand..did u write that? Yes.... ;D Wrote that this afternoon.. when it was raining heavily outside.. and I was really bored studying for my Moral paper this Saturday.. That's how BM came about.. Suddenly beria-ia to write a pantun
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Post by sevelynn on Dec 13, 2005 0:08:04 GMT 8
Oh my god la lisa!!!!!! You sure you want to study accountancy ar? Go become poet better!!!! haha!! Siao one lor you!!!! Send in to the newspapers!!!!!
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Post by jesslyn on Dec 13, 2005 0:13:47 GMT 8
WOW!!! soursand, you are good in BM!!!
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Post by valen on Dec 13, 2005 0:23:05 GMT 8
Since we had Chinese and English poems, now it's time for a Malay pantun KELAHIRAN SEORANG BINTANG BARU - DANIELAnak terbang tinggalkan ibu di desa, Kehilangan yang tersayang terasa di dada, Tak kira kaum, tak kira bangsa, Semua bersatu menyokong anda.
Ikan jerung daging biawak, Ada yang makan tak jemu-jemu, Dari Semenanjung hingga Sabah Sarawak, Semua menanti untuk melihatmu.
Perasaan zaman kanak-kanak takkan sama, Hati disentuh fikiran dibelai, Ibu bapamu menjadi peminat pertama, Pengorbanan mereka tidak ternilai.
Tidakku tahu ke manamu pergi, Inginku melihatmu buat kali terakhir, Senyuman manismu nampakkan gigi, Nyanyianmu bagaikan ilmu sihir.
Puteri tampil menaiki gajah, Pilihan yang bertuah ada dalam peti, Kegembiraanmu terpancak di wajah, Walaupun keletihan terasa di hati.
Cinta suci menjadi sandaran, Keikhlasan tak dapat diukur keluasan, Tom yam tembikai menjadi kegemaran, Roti kaya memberi kepuasan.
Korek tanah gunakan sekop, Lagu digubah lirik dikarang, Satu album dibeli tak cukup, Beli lebih untuk dihadiah orang.
Mimpi semalam dalam fikiran, Kenangan manis tak mahu kucampak, Pinkies bersatu menyahut cabaran, Bersama membanteras cetak rompak.
Perasaan mendalam semakin menjadi-jadi, Hanya Tuhan ketahui hala tujumu, Semangat berkobar-kobar skuad pengundi, Sediakan senjata peluru perjuangkan lagumu.
Dear Soursand, this is great piece of work...why dont you send it to Utusan Malaysia or Berita Harian.
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Post by soursand on Dec 13, 2005 0:23:52 GMT 8
Oh my god la lisa!!!!!! You sure you want to study accountancy ar? Go become poet better!!!! haha!! Siao one lor you!!!! Send in to the newspapers!!!!! Thank u Ya, I'm doubting my choice of taking accountancy now Newspaper?? sure ah?? Later they put in under KUMTUM section....
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Post by sevelynn on Dec 13, 2005 0:27:05 GMT 8
Oh my god la lisa!!!!!! You sure you want to study accountancy ar? Go become poet better!!!! haha!! Siao one lor you!!!! Send in to the newspapers!!!!! Thank u Ya, I'm doubting my choice of taking accountancy now Newspaper?? sure ah?? Later they put in under KUMTUM section.... =_=" They not that bad one lor! aiyo, just send!!!
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Post by soursand on Dec 13, 2005 0:27:06 GMT 8
WOW!!! soursand, you are good in BM!!! Thank you, Jesslyn BM was one of my favourite subject back in school
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Post by soursand on Dec 13, 2005 0:28:13 GMT 8
Dear Soursand, this is great piece of work...why dont you send it to Utusan Malaysia or Berita Harian. Hi, Valen... You serious ah? The pantun sounds really kiddy and 'crap' la How to send Later pinkies kena laugh ah
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Post by ~catherine~ on Dec 13, 2005 12:49:00 GMT 8
Yes.... ;D Wrote that this afternoon.. when it was raining heavily outside.. and I was really bored studying for my Moral paper this Saturday.. That's how BM came about.. Suddenly beria-ia to write a pantun OMG!!! lol... your BM is really good...*thumbs up* i hate BM man...i somehow im ok in karangan but the pemahaman n ttatabahasa, haih~ yuck!! hate it!!! ;D ;D how did u ever come 2 like BM in your school days?? i alwiz wished this country has no malay!!! malay never existed!!
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Post by yume on Dec 13, 2005 13:27:00 GMT 8
Wow...the pantun is so nice! Soursand, you're really talented at this...send it in la! ;D
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Post by aliciahd on Dec 13, 2005 14:21:07 GMT 8
yeah .. soursand .. u should send ..
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Post by ~*roxygurl*~ on Dec 13, 2005 16:03:03 GMT 8
wow soursand....ur bm so 'chun' lah!! wahhh nice pantun der man.....=D great job..!! yeah try sending it in...!! hehe!
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Post by jwong on Dec 13, 2005 16:10:23 GMT 8
Soursand, what a pleasant surprise... I was just thinking about asking someone to do the pantun here, and u've done it already.. some more so good and rhyme so well......
Respect lah.... Soursand... seriously I'm looking for BM tutor for my kids.... can teach or not... stephen sitting for upsr next year leh.....
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