Post by yvonne on Jan 11, 2006 15:33:38 GMT 8
HELP ME PINKIES, I WROTE A STORY AND HANDED IT IN TO MY ENGLISH TEACHER AND NOW SHE WANT'S TO USE IT IN THE COMPETITION AGAINST OTHER SCHOOL'S!!!! I HAVE NO CONFIDENCE IN MYSELF SO NOW ALL I WANT IS ALL YOU PINKIES'S HONEST COMMENTS !!!PLS HELP ME... AND I OWE U IDOLHUNTER BIG TIME 4 HELPING ME WITH THE STORY, THEN ONLY NOW IT WOULD BE CHOOSEN ... THANKS A LOT 
HERE IS THE STORY .. HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT
Piere and Terence are very good friends, or likely could be said as a very cute couple. The both of them have been together almost for 3 years now, but unfortunately on one particular day things ended in a rather dreadful way…..
A year before
Piere and Terence strolling by the beach
Hey, Piere don’t you feel awfully happy today ? Yea, of course I do. Oh yea, thanks Terence for that wonderful birthday party. (Piere gave Terence a kiss on her forehead)
Awww… it was nothing, really . That was my best birthday party ever . I’m sure I will never forget it . You better not … (Terence giggled to herself) Ha ha I deffinietly won’t.
Oh yea, I almost forgot here’s your birthday present. Oh you did not have too.. (Piere tore open the gift wrapper) Oh my god!!!! It’s just what I always wanted .. Thanks so much Terence… You’re welcome….
A year after
Thursday – December 15th 2005
Terence was suppose to meet Piere in Three Logs Café.
“Where is she ? ” thought Piere… Suddenly Piere’s phone rang in the tune of both Terence and Piere’s favourite song “heaven knows” … “She’s always on my mind , from the time I wake up till I close my eyes…” Hello.. Hey Piere, Terence here just called to tell u that I’m sorry cause I can’t meet you in Three Logs Café , I’m really sorry . No problem, I will just see you in school tomorrow k ? Ok, got to go now, bye … Hey, Terence you forgot to say …. Trutt ….trutt…. love you … *sigh*
Friday – December 16th 2005
In university (at Terence’s locker)
Hi, Terence . Said Piere. Oh, hi .. In Piere’s mind “ Wat’s with her ? She has been acting so odd lately” Oh yea um….. Piere I’m sorry cause I won’t be able to watch your basket ball match today. Why not ? you have never missed any of my basket ball match before . Um… well it’s just that “Ringg ……….” Well got to go now dun want to be late for class.
At night
Piere talking with his best friend Austin on the phone
“ Obviously what do you think is up with her ?” “How am I suppose to know I’m not her dad” replied Austin . “Thanks for making things worst”. “Hey I wasn’t trying to make things worst ! Hey, got to go now. By the way don’t worry you will figure things out” replied Austin.
Saturday – December 17th 2005
A sleepy Terence woken up by a phone call
“Hello”… “Hi Terence, Piere here just wanted to ask you weather you want to go for a picnic ? Huh , oh sorry but I’m a little busy.. Oh. Then what about tomorrow ? Sorry but I’m not really in to picnics. Oh, ok then , bye . Bye
Saturday – December 24th 2005
A lonely Piere starring at the ceiling.
*Sigh* It’s been a week now since I last spoken to Terence. I wonder what’s she up to? Maybe she doesn’t like me anymore…. well then I’ve decided what to do …….
2 hours later
Piere’s neighbour saw a dreadful sight
Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Screamed Piere’s neighbour. Obviously, she jus saw Piere sprawled in a pool of blood at the ground floor of their condominium. Imediately, Piere’s neighbour dialed 999..Hello .. hello can you please connect me to the nearest hospital please . Ok …titttt….. Hello hospital Triwind …Hello I want to make a report that someone had jumped down from the 8th floor and is now in a critical condition … Ok … please give us your address. My add is Block 3 , Condo Triwind 2 . please hurry the victim can’t last any longer ….
Half an hour later
The ambulance arrives
In half an hour time Piere was transferred safely to the hospital . Quickly Piere’s parents were contacted and was told of the situation … after a 5 hour surgery the doctor finally came out of the room … Well doctor how is my son is he ok ? please tell me he is ok please… I’m sorry madam but …. He couldn’t make it through …. I’m really sorry . Wat
? Please tell me you are kidding .. please…….. ( Piere’s mum sat there in the hall crying ) Honey, please don’t cry . I bet Piere won’t want to see you like that … (obviously Piere’s dad was trying to keep his tears back and console his wife, but after a few minutes he broke out )
Sunday – December 25th 2005 (around 7.30 am )
Terence received a phone call from the hospital
Hello… answered Terence. Um.. is this Terence Lee ? Yes, I am, and may I ask who are you ? This is hospital Triwind we were requested to call you and deliver quite a sad message. Uh huh … and ? Sadly Piere Tan has passed away 10 minutes ago… What !!!!
Are you sure ? I dun believe you … no .. no no !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
In the hospital
The doctor passes a letter found in Piere’s Pocket to her ….
Dear Terence
I know that you might think I’m dumb …. But all I wan to say is since our love in your heart is dying, I might as well die with it ….
PS: I still love you
Love
Piere
Ahhhhh !!!!!!!! Why Piere ?!!!!!!! Our love has never died I was actually just making a christmas present for you …. Why you !!!!!!!!!!! Why !!!!!!!!!!!! Since that day on Terence has never loved again ….. At the end of everyday you can hear a similar music playing from Terence’s room ….
She’s always on my mind,
From the time I wake up, till I close my eyes .
She’s everywhere I go
She’s all I know and though she’s so far away,
It just keeps getting stronger everyday
And even now she’s gone
I’m still holding on
So tell me, where do I start ‘coz it’s breakin’ my heart
Don’t wanna let her go
Maybe my love will come back someday
Only heaven knows
And maybe our hearts will find a way
But only heaven knows
And all I can do is hope and pray ‘coz heaven knows
My friends keep telling me that if you really love her
You’ve gotta set her free and if she returns in time
I’ll know she’s mine
But tell me, where do I start ‘coz it’s brakin’ my heart
Don’t wanna let her go
‘Coz heaven knows why I live in despair
‘Coz wide awake or dreamin’, I know she’s never there
And all the time I act so brave, I’m shakin’ inside
Why does it hurt me so ?
Heaven knows…heaven knows .
(the lyrics above are based on the song heaven knows by Daniel lee)
THE END ……….
All rights reserve . please do not reprint ,retype or republish this document without the authors permission. Copyrites of © Yvonne Toh .
Note : Never jump to conclusion, just like Piere you might misunderstand things and end up losing your love ones and your very own life. Think twice before you do something sometimes it’s too late to regret ……
HERE IS THE STORY .. HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT
Piere and Terence are very good friends, or likely could be said as a very cute couple. The both of them have been together almost for 3 years now, but unfortunately on one particular day things ended in a rather dreadful way…..
A year before
Piere and Terence strolling by the beach
Hey, Piere don’t you feel awfully happy today ? Yea, of course I do. Oh yea, thanks Terence for that wonderful birthday party. (Piere gave Terence a kiss on her forehead)
Awww… it was nothing, really . That was my best birthday party ever . I’m sure I will never forget it . You better not … (Terence giggled to herself) Ha ha I deffinietly won’t.
Oh yea, I almost forgot here’s your birthday present. Oh you did not have too.. (Piere tore open the gift wrapper) Oh my god!!!! It’s just what I always wanted .. Thanks so much Terence… You’re welcome….
A year after
Thursday – December 15th 2005
Terence was suppose to meet Piere in Three Logs Café.
“Where is she ? ” thought Piere… Suddenly Piere’s phone rang in the tune of both Terence and Piere’s favourite song “heaven knows” … “She’s always on my mind , from the time I wake up till I close my eyes…” Hello.. Hey Piere, Terence here just called to tell u that I’m sorry cause I can’t meet you in Three Logs Café , I’m really sorry . No problem, I will just see you in school tomorrow k ? Ok, got to go now, bye … Hey, Terence you forgot to say …. Trutt ….trutt…. love you … *sigh*
Friday – December 16th 2005
In university (at Terence’s locker)
Hi, Terence . Said Piere. Oh, hi .. In Piere’s mind “ Wat’s with her ? She has been acting so odd lately” Oh yea um….. Piere I’m sorry cause I won’t be able to watch your basket ball match today. Why not ? you have never missed any of my basket ball match before . Um… well it’s just that “Ringg ……….” Well got to go now dun want to be late for class.
At night
Piere talking with his best friend Austin on the phone
“ Obviously what do you think is up with her ?” “How am I suppose to know I’m not her dad” replied Austin . “Thanks for making things worst”. “Hey I wasn’t trying to make things worst ! Hey, got to go now. By the way don’t worry you will figure things out” replied Austin.
Saturday – December 17th 2005
A sleepy Terence woken up by a phone call
“Hello”… “Hi Terence, Piere here just wanted to ask you weather you want to go for a picnic ? Huh , oh sorry but I’m a little busy.. Oh. Then what about tomorrow ? Sorry but I’m not really in to picnics. Oh, ok then , bye . Bye
Saturday – December 24th 2005
A lonely Piere starring at the ceiling.
*Sigh* It’s been a week now since I last spoken to Terence. I wonder what’s she up to? Maybe she doesn’t like me anymore…. well then I’ve decided what to do …….
2 hours later
Piere’s neighbour saw a dreadful sight
Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Screamed Piere’s neighbour. Obviously, she jus saw Piere sprawled in a pool of blood at the ground floor of their condominium. Imediately, Piere’s neighbour dialed 999..Hello .. hello can you please connect me to the nearest hospital please . Ok …titttt….. Hello hospital Triwind …Hello I want to make a report that someone had jumped down from the 8th floor and is now in a critical condition … Ok … please give us your address. My add is Block 3 , Condo Triwind 2 . please hurry the victim can’t last any longer ….
Half an hour later
The ambulance arrives
In half an hour time Piere was transferred safely to the hospital . Quickly Piere’s parents were contacted and was told of the situation … after a 5 hour surgery the doctor finally came out of the room … Well doctor how is my son is he ok ? please tell me he is ok please… I’m sorry madam but …. He couldn’t make it through …. I’m really sorry . Wat
? Please tell me you are kidding .. please…….. ( Piere’s mum sat there in the hall crying ) Honey, please don’t cry . I bet Piere won’t want to see you like that … (obviously Piere’s dad was trying to keep his tears back and console his wife, but after a few minutes he broke out )Sunday – December 25th 2005 (around 7.30 am )
Terence received a phone call from the hospital
Hello… answered Terence. Um.. is this Terence Lee ? Yes, I am, and may I ask who are you ? This is hospital Triwind we were requested to call you and deliver quite a sad message. Uh huh … and ? Sadly Piere Tan has passed away 10 minutes ago… What !!!!
Are you sure ? I dun believe you … no .. no no !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
In the hospital
The doctor passes a letter found in Piere’s Pocket to her ….
Dear Terence
I know that you might think I’m dumb …. But all I wan to say is since our love in your heart is dying, I might as well die with it ….
PS: I still love you
Love
Piere
Ahhhhh !!!!!!!! Why Piere ?!!!!!!! Our love has never died I was actually just making a christmas present for you …. Why you !!!!!!!!!!! Why !!!!!!!!!!!! Since that day on Terence has never loved again ….. At the end of everyday you can hear a similar music playing from Terence’s room ….
She’s always on my mind,
From the time I wake up, till I close my eyes .
She’s everywhere I go
She’s all I know and though she’s so far away,
It just keeps getting stronger everyday
And even now she’s gone
I’m still holding on
So tell me, where do I start ‘coz it’s breakin’ my heart
Don’t wanna let her go
Maybe my love will come back someday
Only heaven knows
And maybe our hearts will find a way
But only heaven knows
And all I can do is hope and pray ‘coz heaven knows
My friends keep telling me that if you really love her
You’ve gotta set her free and if she returns in time
I’ll know she’s mine
But tell me, where do I start ‘coz it’s brakin’ my heart
Don’t wanna let her go
‘Coz heaven knows why I live in despair
‘Coz wide awake or dreamin’, I know she’s never there
And all the time I act so brave, I’m shakin’ inside
Why does it hurt me so ?
Heaven knows…heaven knows .
(the lyrics above are based on the song heaven knows by Daniel lee)
THE END ……….
All rights reserve . please do not reprint ,retype or republish this document without the authors permission. Copyrites of © Yvonne Toh .
Note : Never jump to conclusion, just like Piere you might misunderstand things and end up losing your love ones and your very own life. Think twice before you do something sometimes it’s too late to regret ……
