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Post by miloyalsupporter on Feb 22, 2006 15:21:31 GMT 8
since you guys are composing.. an idea just popped up in my mind... I edited "Mimpi" and turn in into PINKIES VERSION of "Mimpi". Well, I'm just crapping around actually... you guys don't have to use this as the pinkies official song... just go on with what you guys are doing rite now. this is just something simple that would be fun for all pinkies to sing together in daniel's events... Now, sing this in Mimpi's tune... MIMPI - Pinkies MegaMix[VERSE] inginku, melihat idola ku, kerna mu, menyinari hidup ku,
[BRIDGE] dengarkan sorakkan, pinkies mu bersepadu menyokong senantiasa, selalu ohhh... selalu...
[CHORUS] sedalam tinggi, seluas jauh, begitulah semangat pinkies mu, menyokong daniel selalu, selama ini, kau inspirasi ku, suka duka, pinkies bersatu, kami bersama sanjungi mu, daniel...
very well edited ostro. good job. definately a potential big time lyricist.
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Post by oiyin on Feb 22, 2006 19:35:21 GMT 8
MIMPI - Pinkies MegaMix[VERSE] inginku, melihat idola ku, kerna mu, menyinari hidup ku,
[BRIDGE] dengarkan sorakkan, pinkies mu bersepadu menyokong senantiasa, selalu ohhh... selalu...
[CHORUS] sedalam tinggi, seluas jauh, begitulah semangat pinkies mu, menyokong daniel selalu, selama ini, kau inspirasi ku, [glow=red,2,300]suka duka, pinkies bersatu padu, kita bersama sanjungi mu, daniel...
[/glow] ostrovo, nice job!! thumbs up!! but i jz have a little bit suggestion here... ;D how do u thk? change ur lyrics without ur permission... sorryyyy... hope u dun mind...
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Post by ostrova on Feb 22, 2006 20:14:17 GMT 8
oi yin, of course I don't mind anyone editing it. Just edit it if anyone feels that there are parts of the song that is not appropriate. u know, i also didn't as pot amir's permission to edit his lyrics!! haha!! anyway oiyin, when change "bersatu" to "bersatu padu"... it doesn't go well with the tune of the song already. I also noticed that you changed "kami" to "kita". The proper word to use for this sentence is "kami". Here's the reason: When u say "kita", it refers to yourself and the person you are talking to. In this case, if you use kita, it means you are referring to PINKIES and DANIEL. When u use "kami", it means you are only referring to yourself which excludes the person you are talking to. In this case, "kami" refers to the PINKIES. since this is a song dedicated to daniel, then KAMI is the correct word to use in that particular sentence. =) anyway, good effort!!
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Post by foreverdaniel on Feb 22, 2006 20:52:11 GMT 8
Ostrova........~!!!! d**n chun man the song....edited...wow...we should sing this to daniel...DANIEL...GIVE COMMENT LA>...Wah...Pinkies Album....out in 22 November 2006.....
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Post by oiyin on Feb 23, 2006 16:50:26 GMT 8
oi yin, of course I don't mind anyone editing it. Just edit it if anyone feels that there are parts of the song that is not appropriate. u know, i also didn't as pot amir's permission to edit his lyrics!! haha!! anyway oiyin, when change "bersatu" to "bersatu padu"... it doesn't go well with the tune of the song already. I also noticed that you changed "kami" to "kita". The proper word to use for this sentence is "kami". Here's the reason: When u say "kita", it refers to yourself and the person you are talking to. In this case, if you use kita, it means you are referring to PINKIES and DANIEL. When u use "kami", it means you are only referring to yourself which excludes the person you are talking to. In this case, "kami" refers to the PINKIES. since this is a song dedicated to daniel, then KAMI is the correct word to use in that particular sentence. =) anyway, good effort!! ostrova, hahaha... u taught me BM here pulak... ;D ;D ;D i noe d dfrnt usage for "kami" n "kita"... but when i sing tat song, jz felt like "kita" more suitable... so i jz told u here lo... hope u dun mind... anyway, jz stick to ur original lyrics... well done!!
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Post by melissatan on Feb 23, 2006 17:47:20 GMT 8
you're great ostrova....~ ;D
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Post by ~*^JaSmiNePiNky~*^ on Feb 24, 2006 8:48:16 GMT 8
Hehe..next time we can sing along ya!!!!!!!Daniel will be Woahhhh....Hahaha...
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